"she entered the bar in the spacestation orbiting Kew. she got a hint by a anynomyous person she would meet someone there. when she came there, she saw someone she thougt she would never meet again... 'Fox!' krystal said, and said, 'fox, it's you!'
fox said nothing. he didn't even seem to know her.
Krystal asked 'fox... don't you know me? it's me... Krystal'!
Fox said nothing. he walked away.
'fox... this isn't funny... say you know me! you know who i am!'
'no... i don't...' Fox said.
krystal saw a tear in Fox's eye.
'you know...' said Krystal.
Fox said nothing else. he left the bar... without a word.
you porably asking why i did this and i say: i wanted to make a sad picture. this was just a impulse happening in my head last night when i was in my bed. the story came when i was almost done with this.
this could be interesting, but already there are a few flaws. 1: if its kursed, make sure her hair is purple and 2: make sure the characters are in character. Fox seemed pretty spot on but Kursed was a little to Krystal like. get that right and it'll be all good
-- Live life to be happy, not for money or popularity.
I'll live my life the way I want and nobody is going to tell me otherwise.
Laugh with the Sinners and Cry with the Saints, because the Sinners are much more fun!
well i know that. but she's gone through traumatic changes and is now almost a completly different person.
and SINCE its a fan-fic, i think you should try to keep the characters as close as possible to thier original personalities. its what i try to do when i write mine
-- Live life to be happy, not for money or popularity.
I'll live my life the way I want and nobody is going to tell me otherwise.
Laugh with the Sinners and Cry with the Saints, because the Sinners are much more fun!
this could be interesting, but already there are a few flaws. 1: if its kursed, make sure her hair is purple
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Live life to be happy, not for money or popularity.
I'll live my life the way I want and nobody is going to tell me otherwise.
Laugh with the Sinners and Cry with the Saints, because the Sinners are much more fun!
and two, this is just a fan-fic.
and SINCE its a fan-fic, i think you should try to keep the characters as close as possible to thier original personalities. its what i try to do when i write mine
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Live life to be happy, not for money or popularity.
I'll live my life the way I want and nobody is going to tell me otherwise.
Laugh with the Sinners and Cry with the Saints, because the Sinners are much more fun!
you seems to have suceeded.
i am trying my best, but who knows. their personalities maybye changes.